The goals of marking period two

According to marking period two, I got some improvement and something is still not good enough. There was too many things happened in this quarter so I was confused a lot and I feel I even don’t know what should I do. For this class, I improved my skill to write my thesis, my details and the introduction paragraph. Also, I still need to work on my conclusion and grammar.

During last quarter, I spent lots of time on thinking about details and the connection between the thesis and body paragraphs. I did improve myself even though that’s not perfect. I will continue working on things I have not made it perfect yet. I will also find some better ways to work on these things. I did work hard on things I would like to do before.

Secondly, I would work on my grammar. I found that the most difficult thing for me is not writing details or making my essays in a good structure any more. It’s my grammar. There were too many grammar mistakes. What made this happened could be not paying attention while I wrote essays, being rushed on the essays I was doing or maybe the limited time I spent on improving my writing skills. For the next quarter, I will spend more time on my writing and composition class and I would be sure to make everything better. I would do more exercise on grammar and I would try my best to fix every problem that I had.

Next, there were so many to be verbs in my essay. Even in this blog post. However, I tried to make it better and I’m sure it does get better. I would continue training on it and I would check my drafts more careful to avoid this. Also, I need to improve my vocabulary. They are not enough so I would use a word for so many times that it’s repeating and boring. I would spend more time on remembering new vocabularies and learn to use them in a better way.

Lastly, I would try to write a stronger conclusion to make my essay much more beautiful. I would make it more logically. I would absolutely improve myself. I think I should find more people to help me to check my conclusions next time. Even though I might don’t know how to change my conclusion, and I might feel confused with writing a strong and powerful conclusion. I would still try my best on writing them and would not afraid to change it many times.

To conclude, this period it’s like a winter with all troubles came to me together. I felt bad that I didn’t put a lot of time on writing and it didn’t improved a lot. I was not so busy, I just went to troubles and troubles that made me disappointed and felt so bad. For next semester, everything would be new and it would be a new start, everything would get better.