In class writing- reflect on your essay

According to my essay, I am good at to emphasize my main purpose of the essay. I always use many sentences for helping me state the idea, the topic that I chose. The strength of me are I can analyze in a good way to support my thesis successfully. Also, I think I did well in the choosing of thesis that I choose a good topic that can make me thinking a lot to write.

For my weakness, my grammar is not really well and I am really bad at fiunding my grammar mistakes myself. Also, it is so difficult for me to write lots of details. I can hardly find some words to describe what is in the painting and describe. Even though I can easily tell readers what the scene of the painting related to the emotion of painter, I still cannot say how the painter show that and I cannot really describe the beauty of the painting to somebody that didn't see the painting yet.

Then, if I have more time, I am sure I will write more details, and to find more things that are in the painting. Also, I would fix my essay to be more fluid and better to be read by using more beautiful words and fix all of my grammar mistakes,