Tuesday, April 14, 2015

challenge 2 - draft (not complete)



For the last few days, I just finished reading chapter 9. I can’t imagine that the plot goes so fast. Emma started to make a match on Harriet and Mr. Elton. The plot became more important that people couldn’t forget to read any chapters or sentences. Each sentence might lead readers to a new event.

I found the things that the main character described were exaggerated. It’s fun to see a young couple to fall in love, and I’m sure that Emma in this book couldn’t refuse the happiness when she saw they fall in love because of her. Thus, she might overstate to get more joviality in her mind. Till now, the plot wasn’t seemed to be dramatically, but it seemed like it’s just the bedding of some events’ happening. The descriptions are interesting, but the plots are too peaceful to read, so, a big event must happen soon. By reading the introduction of the book, I guess Emma wouldn’t be a matchmaker on Harriet successfully this time.

On the other side, I wanted to write something about Emma’s personality. I think she was too self-approbation, so maybe a failure in her passionate of being a matchmaker would make her clarify herself better and being less proud of herself.

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